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2nd June 2017
12:36pm BST

"Lisa was not happy. Her mother was back at work. Before Lisa was born, her mother worked in a big office. Yesterday, she told Lisa that she was going back to work. The morning was terrible. Lisa had to get to school on time. Her father had to get to work on time. And now, her mother was in a rush, too."Lynne decided to update the piece and correct it to read:
"Lisa was happy, her mother was back at work. Before Lisa was born, her mother worked in a big office.
Because it valued her important contributions to the workplace, her employer offered nearly a year of paid maternity leave and flex time upon her return."She also edited the rest of it. Here are the two versions:
